domingo, 2 de diciembre de 2012

An English Garden In November ...


The Sun rose up On the trees this morn.mp3

The Sun rose up
On the trees this morn,
Filling their
Branches with
Gold tinged dawn

The frost has
Bitten the
Lawn last night,
Tasting green blood
As it held the
Grass tight.

My bedroom's windows
Are smeared with the kiss
Of Night's embrace,
From it's cold abyss.

The blackbird digs
With her amber beak,
In the armoured ground
For something to eat

And the robin darts out
With its warning "chit chit",
Blush on his chest
Like a flame, newly lit.

The Sun rose up
On the trees this morn,
Filling their
Branches with
Gold tinged dawn
.



Poem and Voice reading (MP3) (c) John lokutus prime

15 comentarios:

  1. Thanks, Bruce. Much appreciated! :)

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  2. Sooo nice. I like your poems.:)

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  3. Thank You for share all this nice poemsof You, and can listen your voice .. I like very much

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  4. Originally posted by dashafide:Thank You for share all this nice poemsof You, and can listen your voice .. I like very muchThanks, Dasha, for reading my poem and listening to my voice - I'm glad you like it - :happy: .. :) and for your lovely reply with your beautiful graphic picture. :happy:

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  5. It is a master poem: full of passions and transcendentalism,

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  6. I am glad the poem touches you in this way. Thank you very much for your appreciation and gracious praise.

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  7. A man with such creativity deserves more appreciation as he provokes feelings and digs deep in mind and imagination.

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  8. Originally posted by lokutus-prime:The Sun rose up On the trees this morn.mp3I like very much JhonThank you, perhaps one day I use this mp3 ....

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  9. Originally posted by dashafide:Originally posted by lokutus-prime:The Sun rose up On the trees this morn.mp3
    I like very much Jhon
    Thank you, perhaps one day I use this mp3 ....Espero que algún día van a utilizar este formato mp3, querida dasha .... Oh muchas gracias por tus palabras y por bella flor brillante ... es maravilloso ver esto ... :happy:I hope one day you will use this mp3, dear dasha.... Oh thank you so much for your words and for beautiful glittering flower... it's wonderful to see this... :happy:

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  10. Originally posted by classicSuleiman:A man with such creativity deserves more appreciation as he provokes feelings and digs deep in mind and imagination. I am touched by your generosity.... thank you again for your gracious mind and heart. :happy:

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  11. Is my hope too, thank youNice week for you. :)

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  12. Gracias, Dasha, me alegro que tiene esta esperanza.Que tengan una semana muy agradable también. :)

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  13. Gracias JohnMuchas felicidades para Usted y su familia

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  14. Gracias Dasha! Muchas felicidades para Usted y su familia

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