miércoles, 14 de noviembre de 2012

YOUR EYES....


When I look at your eyes I see your true self.
I see you're sweet, and caring.
I see you're giving and forgiving.
I see your love for me.

When I look at your eyes I stop myself from crying
When I'm alone and think about your eyes I cry.
I can't stop thinking that one day I'll never see those eyes again
That I'll never see the love or the sweetness
Or the love that makes you who you are.
One day you'll be gone - gone from me.
Gone from this world.
No matter what happens, those eyes will one day close
And forever rest in peace.

But you'll never be completely gone,
Because every time I close my eyes,
There you will be.

14 comentarios:

  1. Nice. It reminds me of the song "When I look into your eyes" by Firehouse.

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  2. Nice poem and chance meeting of eyes that cannot let go - is always good to keep that thought as well and never let it fade. Allow me to share a couple of things on this one - the commas are not required. The first opening line..should be..'When I look into your eyes.. etc'

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  3. Nice poem its reminded us of inevitable

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  4. Originally posted by bjblada:Bruce Jacob Bladabjblada # Thursday, November 15, 2012 1:00:25 PMNice. It reminds me of the song "When I look into your eyes" by Firehouse.This song dear Bruce: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQSkuDWhaAo

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  5. Originally posted by kumarpraveentyagi:praveen kumar tyagikumarpraveentyagi # Thursday, November 15, 2012 3:46:50 AMThanks Kumar

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  6. Originally posted by bjblada:Bruce Jacob Bladabjblada # Thursday, November 15, 2012 1:00:25 PMNice. It reminds me of the song "When I look into your eyes" by Firehouse.Oh yes, I try to listen the song dear BruceThank you

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  7. Originally posted by walexexy2:asiru Adebowalewalexexy2 # Monday, November 19, 2012 6:44:42 AMNice poem its reminded us of inevitableThank you I´m glad that like you dear Adrbowale

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  8. Originally posted by upyerjumper:bernard cupyerjumper # Thursday, November 15, 2012 6:23:45 PMThank you dear Bernardwellcome ... I change now

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  9. Originally posted by annaxx:Anna annaxx # Thursday, November 15, 2012 1:16:30 AMLove itThank you dear AnnaHugs

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  10. Yes Emma that is the song on youtube. One of my favourites.

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  11. Originally posted by ellyhoekstra:Elly ♥ ellyhoekstra # Jueves, 22 de noviembre 2012 05:47:11 PM

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  12. Oh nice dear Bruce, I´m glad for it.

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